Revise Spies

After completing their sloppy copy, students sign up for a revising conference with myself. Together, we find misspelled words and incorrect grammar. We determine parts of the story that may be confusing to the reader or ideas that may need to be put in a different order. We also make sure that the writing includes a topic sentence and a concluding sentence. After discussing the revisions that need to be made, students make the changes on their own and sign up for a final conference. This process goes on until the student's story is in its final form. The student can now begin a neat sheet.

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MCOATT/Standard C/Standard D/Standard E/HyperStudio Project/PIViT Projects